JOURNAL OF A COMPULSIVE READER
By Charles Matthews
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Friday, December 23, 2011

15. A Dance With Dragons, by George R.R. Martin, pp. 395-419

Daenerys

Daenerys is growing worried about the ships that are blockading Slaver's Bay, but all her admiral, Groleo, can offer her is advice to turn her dragons loose and burn them. Barristan assures her that the city is well-supplied for the time being.


Skahaz, attended by two of the guards known as Brazen Beasts because they wear animal masks of brass, tells her that Hizdahr has been visiting the wealthy of Meereen, and that it has been twenty-six days since the Sons of the Harpy have committed a murder. Skahaz believes that Hizdahr is himself the Harpy and wants to torture the truth out of him. To his displeasure, Daenerys forbids it.


He then presents her a list of all the Meereenese ships participating in the blockade, which represent all the ruling families of the city. He wants to send the Brazen Beasts to all the houses and imprison all the kin as hostages. Again, she forbids it to prevent "open war inside the city. I have to trust in Hizdahr. I have to hope for peace." Skahaz glowers as she burns the list.


Later, Barristan praises her restraint, saying her brother Rhaegar would approve. But she remembers what Jorah Mormont said: "Rhaegar fought valiantly, Rhaegar fought nobly, Rhaegar fought honorably. And Rhaegar died."


At her public hearing of grievances, there are very few attending, and Reznak mo Reznak tells her people are afraid to leave their houses. Then that evening, Galazza Galare arrives, along with Grey Worm. They tell her that a dying man arrived on a pale horse to say that Astapor is burning. He was emaciated and feverish, suffering from bloody dysentery. She realizes that if the Yunkai'i have taken Astapor, they will aim at Meereen next, and tells Barristan to recall her bloodriders and her sellswords.


Brown Ben Plumm and the Second Sons are the first to arrive, eight days later. They bring with them three Astapori with harrowing tales of the fall of the city. Two of them thank Daenerys for giving them refuge in Meereen, but she sees the truth in the eyes of the third: "She knows I cannot keep them safe. Astapor is burning, and Meereen is next." And Brown Ben says there are hundreds, even thousand of refugees still to come. "The Cats and the Windblown are swarming through the hills with lance and lash, driving them north and cutting down the laggards."


Daenerys is troubled by what to do about them: She is the one who disturbed the order in their city. Reznak mo Reznak has an answer for her: Marry Hizdahr. But Daenerys also remembers Quaithe's warning: "Beware the perfumed seneschal." Brown Ben's solution is to unleash the dragons, but she tells him she can't do that. Then they should leave Meereen, he advises, "and start west with wagons full o' gold and gems and such."


She determines, however, that they should stand and fight: "I defeated the Yunkai'i before. I will defeat them again." But her counselors disagree on the answers to her questions: "Where, though? How?" She commissions the Second Sons to scout the enemy, but she says the Astapori refugees must be welcomed. Barristan protests, "Your Grace, I have known the bloody flux to destroy whole armies when left to spread unchecked. The seneschal is right. We cannot have the Astapori in Meereen." So she tells them to set up a refugee camp outside the walls.


Privately, she consults with Barristan, whose assessment of the situation is gloomy. And she recognizes what she needs to do to at least stabilize the city: "I need Hizdahr zo Loraq."


Melisandre


In her chambers, Melisandre gazes into the fire, seeking to be sure of what she has seen there. She looks especially for "the grey girl on the dying horse," who she has told Jon is his sister Arya. She sees "A wooden face, corpse white," and it sees her. "Beside him, a boy with a wolf's face threw back his head and howled." She hears voices out of the past: "'Melony,' she heard a woman cry. A man's voice called, 'Lot Seven.'" She hears Jon Snow's name, and sees his face appear and disappear.
Now he was a man, now a wolf, now a man again. But the skulls were here as well, the skulls were all around him. Melisandre had seen his danger before, had tried to warn the boy of it. Enemies all around him, daggers in the dark. He would not listen.
She thinks, "I pray for a glimpse of Azor Ahai, and R'hllor shows me only Snow." She asks Devan, Stannis's squire, to bring her a drink of water. He was upset when Stannis left him behind to stay with Melisandre, but she had asked for him specifically, knowing that Davos had already lost four sons.


Devan suggests that she eat something, and when she sends him to fetch her breakfast she tells him to find Rattleshirt and send him to her. When he arrives, she notices that he isn't wearing his armor of bones. "He was cloaked in shadows too, in wisps of ragged grey mist, half-seen, sliding across his face and form with every step he took." When she comments on the missing bones, he tells her, "The clacking was like to drive me mad."


In the iron fetter he wears on his wrist, there is a ruby. He says he can feel its warmth, and sometimes it even burns and he's tempted to pry it out. She tells him, "The spell is made of shadow and suggestion. Men see what they expect to see. The bones are part of that," and wonders if she made a mistake by sparing him. She tells him that Lord Snow's rangers will return today, "with their blind and bloody eyes." That, he tells her, is the work of the Weeper -- one of the wildling chieftains who remained north of the Wall.


Then she tells him about the girl on the dying horse, whom she still assumes to be Arya Stark. She wants to send him out to rescue her. He scoffs at the idea: "No one ever trusted Rattleshirt but fools. Snow's not that. If his sister needs saving, he'll send his crows. I would." He asks where she saw the girl, and from her description he recognizes Long Lake. But their conversation is interrupted by the sound of a warhorn. It is the signal for returning rangers, and she tells him to stay there. When the Watch sees what has happened to the rangers, they will be angry at the wildlings.


She goes out and follows the tunnel through the Wall to where Jon and the black brothers are gathered around three spears, each with the head of a ranger impaled on the point, the eyes gouged out of each head. Bowen Marsh identifies the rangers for her, and comments that with the ground so frozen it must have taken half the night for the wildlings to drive the spears so deep. He worries that they are still close by, watching, but Jon says they have gone. "Ghost would have their scent if they were still out there." He orders the heads taken and burned until nothing but bone is left.


When he sees Melisandre, he asks her to walk with him, which pleases her. They walk slowly, according to her plan, because her warmth causes the ice in the tunnel beneath the Wall to melt and drip: "He will not fail to notice that." He asks if she has seen the other six rangers, and she tells him she hasn't. She does tell him that she had a vision of "towers by the sea, submerged beneath a black and bloody tide." He takes that to be Eastwatch, but although she isn't entirely sure that is what the vision signified, she agrees with him. She asks him to come to her chambers, and he agrees.


As they walk, she can sense his mistrust, and she recognizes it as the same mistrust Stannis once had in her. "In truth, the young lord commander and her king had more in common than either one would ever be willing to admit." She notes that he hasn't asked about Arya, and he tells her that his oath to the Watch means that he has no sister, and that there is no way he can help her. When they enter her chambers, he sees Rattleshirt and bristles. The wildling taunts him, but turns his attention to Melisandre, telling her that he'll need half a dozen good horses and some spearwives to accompany him. "The girl's more like to trust them, and they will help me carry off a certain ploy I have in mind."


Melisandre explains to Jon that she is sending Rattleshirt to rescue Arya. Jon objects, furiously, "If he tries to leave Castle Black without my leave, I'll take his head off myself." But Melisandre sends Devan away, then touches the ruby at her neck and speaks a word. "The wildling heard one word, the crow another. Neither was the word that left her lips." Suddenly, Rattleshirt is transformed into Mance Rayder. And Jon learns that it was Rattleshirt who was burned. He calls it "sorcery," but she replies, "Call it what you will. Glamor, seeming, illusion." But to her self she admits it was a difficult spell to bring off. "When the flames had licked at Rattleshirt, the ruby at her throat had grown so hot that she had feared her own flesh might start to smoke and blacken. Thankfully Lord Snow had delivered her from that agony with his arrows."


She points out that Mance won't betray him, because they hold his son and because Jon had pleaded against his execution. "There he stands, Lord Snow. Arya's deliverance. A gift from the Lord of Light ... and me."

Thursday, December 15, 2011

8. A Dance With Dragons, by George R.R. Martin, pp. 203-231

Daenerys

Daenerys is entertaining Xaro Xhoan Daxos of Qarth, who has brought with him a company whose dancers, male and female, perform naked, the men with full erections. The dance ends with copulation set to music. Daenerys is somewhat distracted by the performance: She is hoping to initiate a trade agreement with Xaro, but her mind is really on the imminent return to Meereen of Daario Naharis and his Stormcrows.

Xaro is full of compliments for Daenerys, but he also knows her predicament: "It is said that your enemies have promised wealth and glory and a hundred virgin slave girls to any man who slays you." He also notices the absence of Jorah Mormont. Once again, he presents her with the idea of marrying him, but she's wise to him: "I saw which dancers you were watching," she tells him.

He is open to the prospect of resuming trade with Meereen, but on his own terms: gold for slaves. Daenerys is insistent that the city remain free, but she recognizes the truth in Xaro's characterization of the city she rules: "A poor city that once was rich. A hungry city that once was fat. A bloody city that once was peaceful." He also informs her that her enemies are buying up sellswords: "The Company of the Cat, the Long Lances, the Windblown. Some say that the Wise Masters have bough the Golden Company as well." She counters that she has her dragons, but he notes that he hasn't seen them since he has been there.

But he offers her ships: "There are thirteen galleys in the bay. Yours, if you will have them. I have brought you a fleet, to carry you home to Westeros." In short, he wants to get rid of her. He tells her to inspect the ships, and "When you are satisfied, swear to me that you shall return to Westeros forthwith, and the ships are yours. Swear by your dragons and your seven-faced god and the ashes of your fathers, and go." She will not live long, he tells her, if she stays in Meereen.

When Xaro is gone, she asks Barristan what he thinks of the offer, and he admits that with the ships, "we might be home before year's end." He offers to take Admiral Groleo and inspect "every inch of those ships." She agrees, but worries about what will happen to Meereen when she leaves.

The next morning she hears Lord Ghael of Astapor plead with her to supply some of her Unsullied to defend his city, and when she declines he spits in her face. Strong Belwas seizes him and knocks him to the marble floor, breaking out some of his teeth. She tells Belwas to take him away, but spares his life. That afternoon, Barristan and Groleo return from the inspection of the ships to tell her that they are old but well-maintained. Reznak complains that her followers will be killed if she leaves, so she offers to take anyone with her who wishes to go. Barristan chides them for cowardice: "Her Grace freed you from your chains. It is for you to sharpen your swords and defend your own freedom when she leaves."

The argument grows heated, and finally Daenerys has had enough: "I will not abandon Meereen to the fate of Astapor. It grieves me to say so, but Westeros must wait." Groleo and Barristan are aghast at the decision, but she sticks to it. She calls for Xaro and tells him that she intends to stay. He is angry, and warns, "When your dragons were small they were a wonder. Grown, they are death and devastation, a flaming sword above the world." And he adds, "I should have slain you in Qarth." She tells him to leave the city immediately.


The next morning, Xaro has gone, but his ships remain. And a messenger from the ships brings her "a black satin pillow, upon which rested a single bloodstained glove." It is a token of war.


Jon


Jon is touring the "wormways," the tunnels beneath the wall, and the vaults where food supplies are stored. He is impressed with how much food is there, but Bowen Marsh, the Lord Steward, who is with him, cautions that these supplies were sufficient to sustain the watch for three or for years of winter, but now that the wildlings and the queen's and king's men are there, "We'll be down to turnips and pease porridge before the year is out. After that we'll be drinking the blood of our own horses." Marsh also warns about sickness and malnutrition and advises that they go on winter rations now.


Jon reflects on the difficulty of obtaining supplies, and considers asking for aid from the Eyrie. He "wondered how Lady Catelyn's sister would feel about feeding Ned Stark's bastard. As a boy, he often felt as if the lady grudge him every bite."


When they return to the surface he finds Devan Seaworth, Stannis's squire, waiting for him, stiff with fright at the presence of Ghost. Jon sends the direwolf away, and Devan tells him that the king wants to see him. In Stannis's solar he finds Ser Richard Horpe and Ser Justin Massey, who had been sent south on a mission whose nature Jon hadn't been told. Also present are Sigorn, the new Magnar of Thenn, and Rattleshirt, who gloatingly shows him a ruby that he says was a present from Melisandre, who is also there.


Stannis surprises Jon by saying that he is presenting Rattleshirt to him as a gift: "You did say you wanted men, Lord Snow." Jon protests that he can't trust Rattleshirt, but Melisandre says a few words in a language Jon doesn't understand, and both the ruby at her throat and the one on Rattleshirt's wrist begin to pulse with light. She tells Jon that as long as he wears the ruby he is bound in her service. And Rattleshirt says he will obey, as long as he doesn't have to wear the black.


Stannis then asks Jon to tell him about Mors Umber, who has offered his allegiance to Stannis for a price: "He wants Mance Rayder's skull for a drinking cup, and he wants a pardon for his brother, who has ridden south to join Bolton." Jon advises him to accept the terms, telling him that if the brother, Hother Umber, has joined the Boltons, it is because the Lannisters hold Greatjon Umber captive.


There is some blustering from the queen's men about the value of Jon's advice, but Stannis silences it. He then tells Jon that he plans to march on the Dreadfort, the seat of the Boltons. Ramsay, he says, has gone south, apparently to strike at Moat Cailin, and to clear the way for Roose Bolton to return north. He plans to take the Dreadfort unaware, but Jon says he can't. This causes outrage among the queen's men, but Stannis silences it. Jon explains that they must cross Umber lands to reach the Dreadfort, and their movements will be reported. And even if they reach the Dreadfort, Ramsay Bolton will cut off their retreat. "Moat Cailin will fall before you ever reach the Dreadfort. Once Lord Roose has joined his strength to Ramsay's, they will have you outnumbered five to one."


Others join in arguing against Jon's position, and Stannis says he will also have the support of the wildlings, under the command of the Magnar. "He means to plunder our armory, Jon realized. Food and clothing, land and castles, now weapons. He draws me in deeper every day." Jon also informs Stannis of the hatred of northerners for the wildlings. "Taking them will only serve to turn my lord father's bannermen against you."


Stannis grinds his teeth, then dismisses everyone except Jon. And Melisandre. Stannis tells Jon that both Horpe and Massey want to be Lord of Winterfell, and that Massey "wants the wildling princess," meaning Val. Jon replies that Winterfell belongs to Sansa, but Stannis doesn't want to hear  of that, because of Sansa's marriage to Tyrion Lannister. He offers Jon another chance to "amend your folly, Snow. Take a knee and swear that bastard sword to me, and rise as Jon Stark, Lord of Winterfell and Warden of the North." Jon refuses again.


Stannis then informs Jon that he intends to proceed with the attack on the Dreadfort, "Despite the counsel of the great Lord Snow." Jon observes that the attack might not be necessary to gain the allegiance of the north if he could persuade Wyman Manderly, who controls White Harbor. But Stannis hasn't heard from Davos, and is persuaded that White Harbor isn't going to be his. The only way he can persuade the north to his side is by a successful battle against the Boltons.


Jon then presents a bargain: If Stannis will give him the wildlings, he will show the king where he can find the men he needs. He indicates on the map where the mountain clans live. "Your Grace will need to go to them yourself. Eat their bread and salt, listen to their pipers, praise the beauty of their daughters and the courage of their sons, and you'll have their swords." Once he gains their support, Stannis should attack Deepwood Motte. Stannis realizes what Jon is proposing: "If I can smash the ironmen ... the north will know it has a king again."
And I will have a thousand wildlings, thought Jon, and no way to feed even half that number